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sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote2008-01-10 12:32 am

There were berries and cherries as thick as might be seen

My poem "Cherries in Winter" is now online at Goblin Fruit. It's possibly one of the few nonfantastic pieces I have ever written, maybe. Read the rest—the green children, the kitsune, the cryptozoologist and the explorer, the seal-woman, the choke-damp. It's like an illuminated manuscript every quarter-year.

[identity profile] sboydtaylor.livejournal.com 2008-01-10 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful mood, wonderful sense of loss at the end.

[identity profile] sboydtaylor.livejournal.com 2008-01-10 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Even better on the second reading. The "shutters all time into stutters and blinks" line is really well done.