They say he is a monster, dear old Mr. Green

[sovay]

So I wanted to write about Avengers: Age of Ultron (2015) when I got home tonight.

Slightly past the 2000-word mark, my arms hit a brick wall.

I will finish the post and put it up tomorrow. Expect discussion of structure, voice, and Bruce Banner. I am going to put an ice pack on my elbows and go to bed.

Comments

[kore]

I know he wanted to start out in media res and then split the team up (I think he was all "I want to DESTROY them and give them pain mwahaha," sigh) but a dear friend of mine who's an excellent writer pointed out, the first movie worked because there was an external conflict, Loki, and then the space centipedes (I don't remember their name). Loki kicked up their internal conflicts, they had to resolve the internal conflict to overcome the second external conflict, boom, you had plot, or at least the mechanism. But if they're all Team the Best Team right at the start and then it's just internal conflict then you get "plot" like Tony being stupid and Bruce going "Your idea is dumb!....let's go for it."

I suppose Whedon might've been going for Wanda being the Loki figure and fucking them all up the way the sceptre did, but I personally truly didn't get from the movie the narrative that Wanda messed with them to the extent that she tripped Tony's PTSD and Nat's wanting a family? (what) and so on. I know other people did, but it didn't seem as clear to me. I think maybe that's what Whedon was really aiming for -- the internal stuff gets tripped and overpowers them and drives the plot (again) -- but this time I, personally, just didn't see it. (I might have just been too dumb and/or annoyed to see it! This is entirely possible.)

Maybe part of the problem was Wanda's powers were so undefined....she could mess with brains AND zap people AND throw Bat Bogey hexes and so on. You know if Loki shows up in a movie, the trickster is going to mess with people and gleefully use their own weak spots against them.

....Also I gotta say, I love me some reformed assassin/criminal stories (Faith, Natasha, Bucky) but I would be SO WARY of letting someone like that on the team, because she seems like such a complete fucking loose cannon. It does seem like a nice setup for some Natasha/Wanda mentoring, but I doubt MCU is going to go there. (The people already writing fic about Daddy Clint and Auntie Nat taking Wanda to Clint's farm for R&R knock me out.)