sovay: (Lord Peter Wimsey: passion)
sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote2011-03-14 02:21 pm

In every cabin, I flamed amazement

My poem "Idle Thoughts While Watching a Faun" has placed second in the 2010 Strange Horizons Readers' Poll. Was not expecting that. I am also glad to see Theodora Goss' "The Mad Scientist's Daughter" at the top of the fiction list, since that story by its very existence makes me happy.

Yesterday Spooky and I line-edited a 103,791-word novel and did not bleed out from the eyes, so today we attempt to repeat the trick with the much huger manuscript for Two Worlds and In Between. Wish us luck. Otherwise, we recuperated last night with Palestinian takeout, a lot of staring vaguely into space, and I showed Caitlín Derek Jarman's The Tempest (1979), which I continue to love better than almost any Shakespeare I've seen filmed, and a short film from the same DVD, The Art of Mirrors (1973), which I feel should be better-known than it is. (It's a ritual done with light, reflection, procession, and audience gaze; the first time I saw it, it reminded me of the brief, enigmatic films encountered by some of Caitlín's characters. I believe it was later incorporated into In the Shadow of the Sun (1974), with music by Throbbing Gristle. It was originally titled A Summoning of Angels.) Tonight, assuming we survive that long, we are going to watch the director's cut of Alex Proyas' Dark City (1998).

For my money, the really transgressive love scene in Sholem Asch's God of Vengeance (Got fun nekome, 1907) is not actually the famous one between Manke and Rivkele in the second act (though it is beautifully written, complete with allusions to the Song of Songs, as if there were any doubt that their union is sweeter and more sanctified than any of the heterosexual commerce taking place around them, Rivkele's still-in-the-brokering marriage included), but their first scene together at the end of the second act. Rivkele's mother—offstage, in the next room—is talking up a fantasy of the bridegroom, handsome, well-off, scholarly, whom she imagines her daughter longs for. And Rivkele is feeding her all the right questions ("Is he good-looking, Mama? Where is going to live, Mama? Will he love me, Mama?"), but she's in Manke's arms all the while, kissing between call-outs, answering the questions for herself. I'd love to see that staged.

Okay. Line-edits. Do I owe my soul to the platypus now?

[identity profile] strange-selkie.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Was not expecting that.

*PONK.*

Your soul may in fact only be leased by Platypus Holdings, Inc., I didn't check; but it just sent me to ponk you.

I wish so much we could get a cast together for this. And find a translation and maybe even some music that balances the shtetlik, the modern, the sacred, the profane, the quite-how-daring-it-was with the quite-how-daring-it-would-still-be. It still has too much domestic violence and too many lesbians to get decent traction, I fear.

*sigh*

[identity profile] strange-selkie.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
We also have to find a Manka who could carry off a name like Manka, which is so symbol-front-loaded as to tip over on contact. What you need to find in your reader in that case is someone who makes you go Oh, well, of course, a girl like *that.* I mean, she's got to have something in her favor when Asch saddled her with Manka.

[identity profile] strange-selkie.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoever can sing?

*steeples fingers unsubtly*

*looks about unsubtly*

But yes, something original would be amazing if only we knew composers with free time. Or we could go the Baz Luhrmann route and give it a contemporary soundtrack, but that's awfully fraught.

[identity profile] greygirlbeast.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)

into In the Shadow of the Sun (1974), with music by Throbbing Gristle.

Oh! You didn't tell me that!

[identity profile] shewhomust.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Congratulations! And thanks for the story, too...

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Congrats on your well-loved poem, and also on your feat of line editing valor!

[identity profile] nineweaving.livejournal.com 2011-03-14 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Congratulations! It's a gorgeous poem.

Great good fortune to the novel. I hear it's fabulous.

I need to see the Jarman Tempest on disc. The Netflix streaming version is so irresolutely low-res that I missed three-quarters of its glories. I loved the feral Miranda and the way that the chalk in Prospero's fingers rhymes with Ariel's white boiler suit: they are one and the same, what he works with.

Could we at least do a half-staged reading of the Asch?

Nine

[identity profile] nineweaving.livejournal.com 2011-03-15 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
Sadly, they were all a ghostly blur...

Nine

[identity profile] teenybuffalo.livejournal.com 2011-03-15 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
I wish you all the best with the line edit. Know that my thoughts are with you, and that I am sending you psychic snacks to boost your stamina, including hot nachos, red grapes, clementines, and Fig Newtons. The thought-projection should hit in about half an hour.

[identity profile] teenybuffalo.livejournal.com 2011-03-15 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed them.