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sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote2022-04-04 03:00 pm

I'll wake up in a new life down by the seaside

My poem "Last Minute" is now online at Strange Horizons.

It's the one I wrote in collaboration with my dreaming self—specifically, the dream of reading it in translation in a nonexistent used book store. Awake, I very carefully wrote out a sort of critical apparatus of the text to work from, since the lines I had brought out of the dream totaled just slightly more than half of the poem and the rest I had either to reconstruct from half-remembered images and rhythms or supply my conscious self, and then with unnecessarily thematic irony I lost the entire record a few days later in a computer glitch. Influences detectable on waking included Thorold Dickinson's The Queen of Spades (1949) and Jean Cocteau's Orphée (1950), but one way or another the rest was me. I had brought text out of dreams before, but never co-written with them. The results seem to have found an underworld-ish home.

Happy National Poetry Month!
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[personal profile] davidgillon 2022-04-04 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Your dreaming self does good imagery.
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[personal profile] ashlyme 2022-04-04 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
That's an absolute corker. Kudos to you for bringing it out of dreamland.
Edited 2022-04-04 23:03 (UTC)
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[personal profile] minoanmiss 2022-04-04 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Happy National Poetry Month!
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[personal profile] yhlee 2022-04-05 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
This poem is still spectacular. I'm so glad it's published!

Happy National Poetry Month!

[personal profile] pengwern 2022-04-05 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
What a gorgeous artifact to have rescued from the other world!

[personal profile] pengwern 2022-04-05 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
Do you think you'd be able to attach the circumstances to the poem in some way (if you'd want to do that, of course)? it's very...<3333
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[personal profile] nineweaving 2022-04-05 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh! Few works of art survive that crossing. You were fortunate.

Nine
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[personal profile] asakiyume 2022-04-05 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahh, wonderful. Good to see it in a sharable format.