but he could not stop her heart and it beat for her sisters who died in the cold it grew lilies for her sisters buried in the snow it hoarded fury for her sisters rotting in the mud they joined her in the spring thaw their bones and their feathers her wings fell to the bottom
Where I waited.
I like the repetition and parallelism throughout the poem; it gives it the feel of a ballad or a piece of epic. But the imagery is pretty cool too. ; )
no subject
but he could not stop her heart
and it beat for her sisters
who died in the cold
it grew lilies for her sisters
buried in the snow
it hoarded fury for her sisters
rotting in the mud
they joined her in the spring thaw
their bones and their feathers
her wings
fell to the bottom
Where I waited.
I like the repetition and parallelism throughout the poem; it gives it the feel of a ballad or a piece of epic. But the imagery is pretty cool too. ; )