I believe 'Unveiled' is one of Milan's earliest books, and you can really feel how she grows in confidence and skill even just within the Turner series itself. I don't know if it was her choice or her editors', but 'Unveiled' suffers a lot from being boxed into very traditional romance genre trappings, and each book after that seems to take a step up into her own, more interesting, style. (The Turner series was traditionally published, although I believe she's reclaimed the rights now; Brothers Sinister was the first series that started out in self-publishing.)
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By the way, this is totally off-topic but you might be interested, Milan formerly worked as a lawyer, and she's just been featured in a major Washington Post story regarding sexual harassment from a judge she clerked under.