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sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote2017-06-27 04:42 am

Oh, God will save her, fear you not

I enjoyed this review of a new biography of A.E. Housman, but I got to the last paragraph and disagreed so violently that I spent my shower fuming about it:

But that sweetness, verging on sentimentality, is also Housman's limitation: the lads and lasses slumbering under the grass, never growing old or sick or worrying about how to find a job. Sadness in Housman is a one-size-fits-all emotion, not one rooted in particulars. It puddles up automatically. And reading "A Shropshire Lad" you can find yourself becoming narcotized against feelings that are deeper and more complicated. That may be the real secret of the book's enduring popularity, the way it substitutes for a feeling of genuine loss the almost pleasant pain of nostalgia.

The reviewer claims earlier that "one reason 'A Shropshire Lad' has been so successful is that readers find there what they want to find," so perhaps I am merely following this well-worn tack, but I don't see how you can read Housman and miss the irony, the wryness, the sometimes bitterness and often ambiguity that never prevents the pleasure of a line that turns perfectly on itself. Some of his best poems seem to take themselves apart as they go. Some of them are hair-raising. Some of them are really funny. (It is impossible for me to take "When I was one-and-twenty" as a serious lament. In the same vein, it wasn't until tonight in the shower that I finally noticed that "Is my team ploughing" owes a cynical debt to "The Twa Corbies.") That is much more complicated than a haze of romantic angst and the vague sweet pain of lost content, especially seeing how much of Housman's language is vividly, specifically physical for all its doomed youth and fleeting time, not dreamy at all. Shoulder the sky, my lad, and drink your ale. I am not sure why the reviewer knocks Housman's Shropshire for not being "particular," either. Of course it's not actual Shropshire, where the poet himself acknowledged he never even spent much time. It's Housman's Arcadia, et ego and all. I finished the review and found myself thinking of Catullus—again, I had to have my hair full of soap before I realized why. I don't understand why anyone looks for the undiluted Housman in A Shropshire Lad any more than the Lesbia poems should be assumed to contain the authentic Catullus. Pieces of both of them, sure. But my grandmother didn't need the identity of the addressee of "Shake hands, we shall never be friends, all's over" pinned down in order to copy out the poem and save it after a college relationship broke up badly. (I thought it was hers for years.) Who cares if its second person was Moses Jackson or fictional? It spoke to a real loss. I don't think there is anything anesthetizing in that. I doubt Housman would have wanted the particulars known, anyway. I have to figure out a way to stop fuming and start being asleep.
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[personal profile] ashlyme 2017-06-27 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
I've read little Houseman, but it looks to me as if the reviewer's mistaken his mood for schmaltz. There's a lot of missed nuance. (Would he call Hardy's poetry "Emo"?) Granted that rural nostalgia is a very English disease. Often a cloying one. But nostalgia has edges, too.
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[personal profile] cmcmck 2017-06-27 10:29 am (UTC)(link)
'A Shropshire Lad' has me in tears at times even after all these years and someone needs to learn what's really going on in there!

It's had such an effect on my life that we now live in 'the land of lost content' in rural Shropshire.

'Dead or living, drunk or dry, soldier, I wish you well'......
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[personal profile] chomiji 2017-06-27 11:23 am (UTC)(link)

The reviewer makes the mistake of thinking that he himself is more sophisticated in his view of life than Housman was. IMO, he could do with a closer reading of Terence, This Is Stupid Stuff:

"...And malt does more than Milton can
To justify God's ways to man.
Ale, man, ale's the stuff to drink
For fellows whom it hurts to think...

"I tell the tale that I heard told.
Mithridates, he died old."

Myself, I believe that in much of A Shropshire Lad, Housman accomplished just what he set out to do.

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[personal profile] moon_custafer 2017-06-27 11:32 am (UTC)(link)
I was about to ask if this reviewer had read "Is My Team Ploughing?"
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[personal profile] teenybuffalo 2017-06-27 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
"Is me Team a Ploughing," sung by Dave Webber and Anni Fentiman, in a setting by Dave Webber (I think).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LTkqKDNqB8I

The best possible way to encounter that poem for the first time: as a song in harmony by performers who could have done "Twa Corbies"/"Three Ravens" just before or afterwards.

Yeah, I think the reviewer's full of crap there. Reminds me of the anthologist of a treasury of Victorian verse I have somewhere, who is only on board to have a sneer at how we're much more sophisticated than this, these days.
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[personal profile] choco_frosh 2017-06-27 12:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope sleep happened!
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[personal profile] larryhammer 2017-06-27 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't see how you can read Housman and miss the irony, the wryness, the sometimes bitterness and often ambiguity that never prevents the pleasure of a line that turns perfectly on itself

This.

Well, I can see how -- there are large numbers of people who cannot hear irony unless it is flagged. But they of all people should NEVER, EVER become REVIEWERS.

---L.
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-27 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
that sweetness, verging on sentimentality, is also Housman's limitation

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

I am reminded of the time I read a critic writing in earnest about Hardy, the simple nature poet. Some people catch sight of a couple of green hills and think it's a pastoral and off they go.

We don’t have anything remotely like it in American lit.

//throws a copy of Spoon River Anthology at his head

Some of Emily Dickinson’s brief lyrics come closest—tonally

whaa

but she has never quite attained Housman’s popularity

//gives up
Edited 2017-06-27 15:48 (UTC)
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-27 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah, I think you'd like Lane as a chaser:

http://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2001/02/19/lost-horizon

Lane said in a kissup article to Tina Brown that his pitching that piece led her to ask "Is Housman hot?" IIRC Stoppard was on Broadway or something, so yes, Housman was hot. Then again I think Shropshire Lad's always been hot, or at least never out of print.

I loved Housman since I read my dad's edition of ASL early on but I think my very favourite poem of his is actually the Horace translation:

The snows are fled away, leaves on the shaws
And grasses in the mead renew their birth,
The river to the river-bed withdraws,
And altered is the fashion of the earth.

The Nymphs and Graces three put off their fear
And unapparelled in the woodland play.
The swift hour and the brief prime of the year
Say to the soul, Thou wast not born for aye.

Thaw follows frost; hard on the heel of spring
Treads summer sure to die, for hard on hers
Comes autumn with his apples scattering;
Then back to wintertide, when nothing stirs.

But oh, whate'er the sky-led seasons mar,
Moon upon moon rebuilds it with her beams;
Come we where Tullus and where Ancus are
And good Aeneas, we are dust and dreams.

Torquatus, if the gods in heaven shall add
The morrow to the day, what tongue has told?
Feast then thy heart, for what thy heart has had
The fingers of no heir will ever hold.

When thou descendest once the shades among,
The stern assize and equal judgment o'er,
Not thy long lineage nor thy golden tongue,
No, nor thy righteousness, shall friend thee more.

Night holds Hippolytus the pure of stain,
Diana steads him nothing, he must stay;
And Theseus leaves Pirithous in the chain
The love of comrades cannot take away.
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-27 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
NOT THE DYNASTS OH NO oh man, I was in a grad VicLit seminar that was like half Hardy, and we only had to read the (long, long) opening of the Dynasts and we just wilted. It was so awful.

I think the first time I ever read him for myself was in a poetry anthology, as an adolescent -- stuff like "The Ruined Maid," "Neutral Tones," "Channel Firing," "The Dead Man Walking," "Darkling Thrush," "The Voice" (which is pretty amazing and haunting). Oh yeah, and Dylan Thomas reading "Lizby Brown" and "A Broken Appointment." The St John's College music library had one of those Dylan Thomas Reads records from the sixties in open stacks, and I dubbed it when I was a freshman like I did half their holdings and nearly played it til the tape broke. If you have Spotify you can listen to a lot of it http://www.openculture.com/2016/05/8-glorious-hours-of-dylan-thomas-reading-poetry-his-own-others.html

In a different Vic-and-after Poetry seminar (if I hadn't stupidly tried to get an MFA I'd've gone for that field instead) we read Oscar Wilde, Housman, Thomas Hardy, Hopkins, Sassoon, early Graves, &c., and you could just see peoples' psyches crumple under the pressure of Hardy's despair. "Convergence of the Twain" made people look like they'd just staggered out of an Early Bergman film festival. The novels (Jude, Tess) are bad enough, but the concentrated feeling in the poetry just decks you like a fist.
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-27 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Isn't Lane good? Sometimes he's too clever-clever, but he's always sharp and funny. If you haven't read 'Nobody's Perfect' (named after the closing line of Some Like It Hot) I recommend it.

I like the idea of pairing him with Dickinson. Has anyone ever done it fictionally?

I don't think so but that's a great idea.

I agree with you that he knocks the last verse of that one out of the park. The last two lines could be his own, which tells you how much Horace meant to him.

I had a huge amount of trouble with how Stoppard just took the written poetry and put the spoken words in Housman's mouth ("You're half my life!" he says to Jackson -- er, no), but it's a dreamscape anyway blah blah, but I just felt he didn't quite get Housman -- Housman slips away once again, like a shade, like who is it, Odysseus' mother when he tries to emmbrace her. But there are two awesome scenes in it, where he goes through Latin grammar for a poetry class (Stoppard has him make a female student cry, which 1) probably DID NOT HAPPEN and 2) a FEMALE student wrote in with the famous anecdote about Diffugere so fuck you, Stoppard) and when he talks with his young self about his own translation of it. That was really pure magic.

I think with Housman some of the weird archaic-fake diction comes from a consciousness he's writing at the end of that kind of tradition -- Dorothy Parker sometimes falls into it, too, weirdly enough, in some of her early Serious Poems. I mean, in "Fairies and Fusiliers" Graves does jam up stuff like "I’d Love to be a Fairy’s Child," which sounds like a Christmas cracker, up against "A Dead Boche" and "Letter to S. S." for God's sake. These people were feeling the cultural ground upheave under their feet. -- Millay never does quite escape it, that kind of diction, but I still like her anyway. -- Well I shouldn't generalize like that, the Imagists weren't like that at all, and then you get Marianne Moore, but they were more outliers. D.H. Lawrence wrote poetry in his own voice from the start, although I think people don't like him much anymore, which is a shame, because I think that's when he did a lot of his best writing. -- Imagine him and Housman meeting up, now that would be weird. They might bond over Italy tho. Or the Etruscans.
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[personal profile] nineweaving 2017-06-28 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
I once recited "Terence, this is stupid stuff" from the top of Ludlow Castle, to the wind. Highly satisfactory stuff.

Nine
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[personal profile] cmcmck 2017-06-28 11:44 am (UTC)(link)
With me it was 'afterwards' that brought me up sharp.

I'd been taught as an undergrad by J C Gibson who'd edited all the Penguin edition Hardy novels- he succeeded it putting me off Hardy the novelist for life and sent me in the direction of early English literature, but Hardy the poet? That's something different.
Edited 2017-06-28 11:45 (UTC)

Dumb question

[personal profile] eileenlufkin 2017-06-28 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Is the man Keats?
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[personal profile] ethelmay 2017-06-28 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
By the way, I once had the honor of finding an A.E. Housman translation (done when he was 16) hitherto unnoticed by scholars: see http://www.the-tls.co.uk/articles/private/spider-song/ "The winning translation was printed in the Monthly Packet for November 1875 under the heading “Spider Subjects”: “Of the forty-three translations of Goethe’s Fischer we give the palm to A. E. Housman, for feeling and spirit”."

Re: Dumb question

[personal profile] eileenlufkin 2017-06-29 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the answer and for being kind. I've only read Keats poems that show up in anthologies; did he write about Lulworth cove?
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-29 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't think Lawrence does that in his poetry, at least not the ones I remember, but never mind.

Cool! Re: Dumb question

[personal profile] eileenlufkin 2017-06-29 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the google-fu and the link.
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[personal profile] kore 2017-06-30 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, Lawrence's poetry is not like that. His nonfiction is typically his worst work.
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[personal profile] lauradi7dw 2017-06-30 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Until I followed up from this post, I had never read anything by Housman. I thought of him as someone referenced by others. There is a scene in the 1985 "A Room with a View" in which Simon Callow's Mr. Beebe is perusing Mr. Emerson's bookshelf. "A Shropshire Lad. Never heard of it."

In "Strong Poison," Wimsey remarked "'Mithridates, he died old. In this case, I doubt it'" (approximate quote, without rummaging through the book)
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[personal profile] lauradi7dw 2017-07-05 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
The perception that they are song lyrics seems right to me. I am, as mentioned, not wise in the ways of poetry reading. Most of the actual teaching I received in that regard was in 11th grade English, in which the (student) teacher despaired a little bit about us wanting mostly to read song lyrics rather than established poems. Still, she approved of my essay comparing "Richard Cory" as originally written with "Richard Cory" the Simon & Garfunkel version. What a weird thing to remember.
Shropshire Lad in full is available for free download, so I plan to add it to my tablet and read bits of it on planes. From just the comments section of your post, I like his translation better than the originals, but we'll see.