I confess that I, too, did a double-take when I saw the title "When You Came to Troy."

Just because second person is not my natural narrative viewpoint . . .

I like the negation throughout "Not the Song of Breiseis," things that constantly go against expectations.

Thanks. I realize this makes it sort of an anti-retelling, but I'm still pleased with it: I'm just not sure quite whose brain it came from.