That's one of the places where I wish I could remember what I'd been thinking as I wrote, because it's an unusual detail, but I can't remember why I included it. It makes a difference from identifying characters strictly by hair and eye color, at least
It does. I thought the descriptive language was good throughout - which goes with the whole poet thing, I suppose :)
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It does. I thought the descriptive language was good throughout - which goes with the whole poet thing, I suppose :)