ext_37027 ([identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sovay 2009-06-13 06:33 pm (UTC)

I am genuinely not sure what her interaction with them adds, except layers of historical irony. Perhaps, Clever Author Being Clever, she thought that was enough?

From your three quoted lines, I can't buy that the dead are clear sighted.

The first line reminds me of the one in The Princess Bride about winning a land war in Asia. If the author's hoping for that resonance, for humor, then that's good, but otherwise maybe a little embarrassing?

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