ext_37027 ([identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sovay 2009-04-24 04:17 am (UTC)

This is so lyrical--it flows. I really like it; it *sounds* lovely.

and sad...

the line of our days
already in the hands of other gods....

We held to one another
like pole-star and ploughman, mundus and map---
the crossing of our shadows




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