I think the line I loved best at the time was the one about a cat's cradle of crimson thread, but this time what I noticed was coat-pocket origami.

Thank you! I'm glad it can be gone back to.

I can't wait to see the miniature book. I will watch those parentheses.

I shall keep you posted.

Visually quite a feast--I loved the sphynxes and the heroine's absolutely non-riddle riddles.

And Valentine's:

"Look—an idiot!"
"Where?"

Did you like it as a story, or just a collection of a world?