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sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote2005-04-12 10:17 pm

And I can chart the course of flights of fancy

Apparently it's National Poetry Month. Thanks to darthrami for alerting me, because otherwise I would entirely have missed this opportunity to post some poetry that I like.

(Cut for Sylvia Plath.)

I didn't grow up reading Sylvia Plath. Other than a few encounters in high school with "Daddy," "Metaphor," and "Mirror," and a friend who read The Bell Jar, I had very little familiarity with her work until this summer, when I picked up The Colossus and Other Poems and discovered that I loved her poetry. I'd mostly heard about her suicide. Poet-women who kill themselves, you know that sort of thing . . . I think it put me off. But her work amazes me: how tactile her language is, how much it engages weight and motion and sound braced against sound as well as image, and I'm only sorry I didn't read her sooner. Here are two from The Colossus of which I am particularly fond. You can probably guess why. But I think there's something in there beyond what my obsessions like to see. These, I wish I could have written.

Suicide Off Egg Rock

Behind him the hotdogs split and drizzled
On the public grills, and the ochreous salt flats,
Gas tanks, factory stacks—that landscape
Of imperfections his bowels were part of—
Rippled and pulsed in the glassy updraft.
Sun struck the water like a damnation.
No pit of shadow to crawl into,
And his blood beating the old tattoo
I am, I am, I am. Children
Were squealing where combers broke and the spindrift
Raveled wind-whipped from the crest of the wave.
A mongrel working his legs to a gallop
Hustled a gull flock to flap off the sandspit.

He smoldered, as if stone-deaf, blindfold,
His body beached with the sea's garbage,
A machine to breathe and beat forever.
Flies filing in through a dead skate's eyehole
Buzzed and assailed the vaulted brainchamber.
The words in his book wormed off the pages.
Everything glittered like blank paper.

Everything shrank in the sun's corrosive
Ray but Egg Rock on the blue wastage.
He heard when he walked into the water

The forgetful surf creaming on those ledges.


(This one, especially . . .)

Full Fathom Five

Old man, you surface seldom.
Then you come in with the tide's coming
When seas wash cold, foam-

Capped: white hair, white beard, far-flung,
A dragnet, rising, falling, as waves
Crest and trough. Miles long

Extend the radial sheaves
Of your spread hair, in which wrinkling skeins
Knotted, caught, survives

The old myth of origins
Unimaginable. You float near
As keeled ice-mountains

Of the north, to be steered clear
Of, not fathomed. All obscurity
Starts with a danger:

Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury

And seems to die: so vapors
Ravel to clearness on the dawn sea.
The muddy rumors

Of your burial move me
To half-believe: your reappearance
Proves rumors shallow,

For the archaic trenched lines
Of your grained face shed time in runnels:
Ages beat like rains

On the unbeaten channels
Of the ocean. Such sage humor and
Durance are whirlpools

To make away with the ground-
Work of the earth and the sky's ridgepole.
Waist down, you may wind

One labyrinthine tangle
To root deep among knuckles, shinbones,
Skulls. Inscrutable,

Below shoulders not once
Seen by any man who kept his head,
You defy questions;

You defy other godhood.
I walk dry on your kingdom's border
Exiled to no good.

Your shelled bed I remember.
Father, this thick air is murderous.
I would breathe water.

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