ext_37027 ([identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sovay 2007-10-17 11:24 pm (UTC)

Oh, just wonderful--came here and saw it only now because [livejournal.com profile] seajules referred to it in [livejournal.com profile] spec_poetry


if he smiles not wisely
at the star-scanned sky, but sidelong as scissors
snapped shut—he fingers absently at fir needles,
amber and smoke.


Sidelong as scissors snapped shut. That's an amazing image. Just great.

And--I like the whole *idea* of this poem. And I notice you said you like folkloric devils. Me too.

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