swan_tower: (*writing)
swan_tower ([personal profile] swan_tower) wrote in [personal profile] sovay 2020-01-21 02:44 am (UTC)

I like the idea of a character having accidentally given away the truth long before anyone thought to look for it.

Me too . . . but in this instance it was just a little too distracting, at the wrong point in the story.

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