sovay: (Lord Peter Wimsey: passion)
sovay ([personal profile] sovay) wrote 2017-09-07 03:23 am (UTC)

I just read this this evening and loved it. Well done!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I especially liked your use of colour-words throughout - always fresh and surprising and absolutely evocative.

That is a neat thing to hear as feedback; thank you for telling me.

Also another vote for how good your dialogue is - like asakiyume I heard it all in Irish tones just from the vocabulary and syntax you used.

It's good to hear that it worked. I was mostly (as with most things) getting it out of books.

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